Oh MAN, this is really too much. I thought the first part was good, but this just takes the cake! At first I thought Charlie Brown getting smashed with the ball in the comics was actually kind of funny, but you've given it such an edgy touch that it makes me wonder what's going to happen when he wakes up! Actually, it'd be fun if you did this whole thing with him, Lucy and the infamous football!
I could critique it, but what is there to critique? I'd just be repeating myself, so I'll just say this: you've done a wonderful job. I love it, it's dark, and it's funny. Congrats. Now if only Miller could go back to the way he used to be! Welcome to the list.